Third Grade

Persuasive Writing Examples

Eddie's Best Relative Ever

Yeah ! My sister is the best relative! She lets me have fun with her friends . She is very , very nice. Plus, she let’s me play awesome games with her. As I have noted, my sister is the best relative ever.

My sister let’s me hang out with her friends. Her friends are very, very nice because they let me wrestle with them. My sister Abby lets me watch or play the game they play. Sometimes they even let me play Ghost in the Graveyard. Therefore, I think my sister is the best relative.

My sister Abby is very nice that's why she is the best. She gives money to the poor. She is always nice to me when I help her. She also gives money church. As I have noted my sister is the best relative because she is nice and she plays games with me..

My sister Abby plays a lot of games with me. We love to play Ghost in the Graveyard. We also like to play Parchessi. Sometimes we play Outta Control and get out of control . To conclude, I think my sister is the best relative.

My sister is the best relative. She let’s me have fun with her friends. She is so nice. She let’s me play awesome games with her. In other words, my sister is the best relative.

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Amanda's Best Relative

My Grandma is the best grandma in the whole wide world! First of all, she is very helpful. Also, she is always baking goods. She is also a very, very, hard worker. To conclude, I think my grandma should win the " Best Relative of the Year Award! "

My Grandma is the best because she is very helpful. She helps out by donating clothes to her church. She asks my aunt and my mom if there are any clothes that don’t fit my cousin or I. Then she gives the clothes that don’t fit us to her church, which then get sent to needy children. To put it another way, my grandma is extremely helpful.

Not only is my grandma helpful but she is also an excellent cook! She always bakes yummy goods like cookies, brownies, and caramels. She sometimes brings them to brunches at a place where my aunt lives. It’s called Misoricordia. She also bakes cookies for the holidays and gives them to my relatives. My favorite kind of cookie is a thumbprint cookie. That ‘s why my grandma is a great cook!

Even though my grandma is a great cook, she is a very hard worker! When my aunt comes home, my grandma has to take care of her. It can sometimes be hard because my grandma has to take care of my aunt who has Down Syndrome and my uncle who is deaf. She sometimes does the dishes by herself and has to drive up to Chicago to get my aunt in any kind of weather. As you can see, my grandma is a very hard worker!

My Grandma is the best grandma ever! She is the most helpful person I know. She is also an amazing cook. Besides her being a great cook, my grandma is the hardest worker I know. Therefore, my grandma is the best grandma there ever could be!

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